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...I wrote my first FanFiction in the Age of 6?
As far as I can remember back, I always made up my own stories and loved to hear stories my mom told me or read loud to me. I remember firmly all the "Pixi" Books I had and also have memories on normal Fairy Tales. I forgot some of them, though, but I remember precisely the illustration that came along with them.
As I was six years old, I started to go to school, but couldn't really write of course. Still, my mom who ever encouraged me to keep up making stories insisted that I should preserve the stories. I wasn't very interested in recording them on tape, but she offered to write down what I tell her and even leave room for illustrations.
So I dictated her two short stories (original ones) and then started with my first FanFiction. Funny thing: It was a My Little Pony FanFiction
But it never was completed.
I still have the book with these three stories here (and will translate them in the end, childish stuff ahead!) and even still have a book where I started to write on my own as I finally learned how to write. It was a silly mix between TaoTao ( www.youtube.com/watch?v=vOTViw… ), or at least a panda inspired by this Anime, and Bambi - because I simply copied the whole Bambi-Birth-Scene just with a Panda cup instead of a fawn... XD
So, here they are - My first written down stories.
Beware - they're extremly childish and consist of poor grammar - I was six god-dammit!
But maybe they make you laugh - or feeling bewildered - as I do
Rarrabella and the doll Lisa
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Once upon a time there was a little girl, she was called Rarrabella. She had a small doll, which was called Lisa. Lisa had to go in the cradle.
On the next morning, the doll Lisa had dissapeared from the craddle. So Rarrabella shouted with all her might: "She was stolen, she was stolen!" and tramped firmly on the ground.
Then she cried "huhu-huhu".
The mother cam running berserk and called: "Which doll is gone, which doll is gone!"
Rarrabella answered crying: "It was Lisa - Lisa is gone!"
The mother answered: "Oh no!"
The child Rarrabella said: "I know, that you're sad too, I also know, that she was expensive."
And then she noticed, that the doll carriage of Lisa was gone.
But this wasn't too bad, because she had still some more doll carriages.
Then the mother said: "A thief surely has stolen Lisa." And this was true. Rarrabella discovered the Thief on a meadow and scuttled off in a hurry.
She divested the doll and the doll carriage from him. Before she returned home, she layed the doll appreciatively back in the doll carriage.
As she run home, she shouted: "Mummy, Mummy, I have my beloved Lisa and the doll carriage back!"
The mother was glad for the doll and the doll carriage beeing back again. "See,", she said, "it was a thief who stole your favorite stuff."
Now Rarrabella played with her favorite toys again.
And now the fairytail is over.
(written on 29th September 1991)
Once upon a time there was a tennis player who became an earthworm
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Once upon a time there was a tennis player who wanted to experience something under the earth someday. Then she digged a hole in the ground with her mouth and digged herself a properly tunnel.
And then she digged and digged till the night came out. Then she took a flag and layed herself down on the ground and then she lied stars around and then she fell asleep.
On the next day she woke up and was as hungry as a horse and decided to dig an exit and digged into this direction a trap and then she digged in another direction a trap again.*
And then in this direction there was no trap this time. But she noticed then, that she swallowed dirt the whole time and wasn't hungry anymore.
Now she liked the earth so wonderfull, that sie digged it in again. Then she built a bed, she wasn't seen on the tennis court anymore and became henceforth an earthworm.
Now the fairytale is over.
(written on 1st October 1991)
*
I have no idea - it doesn't make sense in german, too, so I decided to litteraly translate it and not to make sense out of it ;D
(Now for the MLP-Fanfiction )
Rainbow-Pony-Story
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Once upon a time there was a little girl, that had blonde hair and blue-black eyes. It was dressed in a red dress with golden flowers and plants on it. The borders and the buttons were made of silver. On the sleeves the dress was silver, too. The dress and the girl were beautiful.
The girl got lost in the deep woods while picking berries. There she suddenly heared many trampling, neighing and snorting. Suddenly a fast Pony came towards her. There Anabel* saw something totally weired. The pony had pink hair and was totally colorful. Suddenly it reined in front of her. As Anabel wanted to pet it, it started to talk - but real horses don't talk! - and what did it said?
"I am Sundance** - and who are you, little girl?"
"I am Anabel and I'm lost."
Anabel ran away quickly, because she was afraid of the Pony. But the Pony outran her soon with her quick feets. Anabel had a scare and the Pony talked.
"You don't have to be afraid of me - I am a Pony from the Ponyland and we are gentle! Come with me to our village first."
As they arrived, Anabel marveled.
There were much more Ponys and there was a Pony standing, that was the queen - she was called Magic Pony*** and had a golden star below her ear.
Then came even more Ponys. They walked towards Anabel and surrounded her.
The queen walked to Sundance.
"Why did you brought that girl with you, Sundance?"
"She got lost - I saw her as I strolled in the woods."
So the colorful Ponys all helped Anabel.
As Anabell was home again, she told the story to her parents.
(written on 9th March 1992)
*
Anabel was the german name of Marple.
www.buffys-paradise.de/Ponyfot…
**
I don't know why I choosed Sundance here. It was either the fact that I liked her in the 2 VHS tapes I had from the very first MLP Cartoon, or the fact that she was called "Sauseschnell" in germany, which means "wingding fast" translated - or simply "pretty fast".
www.buffys-paradise.de/Ponyfot…
***
I have no idea which Pony it was. It simply went under "Zauberpony" (Magic Pony) in the writing. Relating to the mentioned star, it could've been "Magic Star" www.buffys-paradise.de/Ponyfot… - or any other pony of a "Magic Pony" series, so proberly a mere Unicorn ;D
As far as I can remember back, I always made up my own stories and loved to hear stories my mom told me or read loud to me. I remember firmly all the "Pixi" Books I had and also have memories on normal Fairy Tales. I forgot some of them, though, but I remember precisely the illustration that came along with them.
As I was six years old, I started to go to school, but couldn't really write of course. Still, my mom who ever encouraged me to keep up making stories insisted that I should preserve the stories. I wasn't very interested in recording them on tape, but she offered to write down what I tell her and even leave room for illustrations.
So I dictated her two short stories (original ones) and then started with my first FanFiction. Funny thing: It was a My Little Pony FanFiction
But it never was completed.
I still have the book with these three stories here (and will translate them in the end, childish stuff ahead!) and even still have a book where I started to write on my own as I finally learned how to write. It was a silly mix between TaoTao ( www.youtube.com/watch?v=vOTViw… ), or at least a panda inspired by this Anime, and Bambi - because I simply copied the whole Bambi-Birth-Scene just with a Panda cup instead of a fawn... XD
So, here they are - My first written down stories.
Beware - they're extremly childish and consist of poor grammar - I was six god-dammit!
But maybe they make you laugh - or feeling bewildered - as I do
Rarrabella and the doll Lisa
*********************
Once upon a time there was a little girl, she was called Rarrabella. She had a small doll, which was called Lisa. Lisa had to go in the cradle.
On the next morning, the doll Lisa had dissapeared from the craddle. So Rarrabella shouted with all her might: "She was stolen, she was stolen!" and tramped firmly on the ground.
Then she cried "huhu-huhu".
The mother cam running berserk and called: "Which doll is gone, which doll is gone!"
Rarrabella answered crying: "It was Lisa - Lisa is gone!"
The mother answered: "Oh no!"
The child Rarrabella said: "I know, that you're sad too, I also know, that she was expensive."
And then she noticed, that the doll carriage of Lisa was gone.
But this wasn't too bad, because she had still some more doll carriages.
Then the mother said: "A thief surely has stolen Lisa." And this was true. Rarrabella discovered the Thief on a meadow and scuttled off in a hurry.
She divested the doll and the doll carriage from him. Before she returned home, she layed the doll appreciatively back in the doll carriage.
As she run home, she shouted: "Mummy, Mummy, I have my beloved Lisa and the doll carriage back!"
The mother was glad for the doll and the doll carriage beeing back again. "See,", she said, "it was a thief who stole your favorite stuff."
Now Rarrabella played with her favorite toys again.
And now the fairytail is over.
(written on 29th September 1991)
Once upon a time there was a tennis player who became an earthworm
******************************************************
Once upon a time there was a tennis player who wanted to experience something under the earth someday. Then she digged a hole in the ground with her mouth and digged herself a properly tunnel.
And then she digged and digged till the night came out. Then she took a flag and layed herself down on the ground and then she lied stars around and then she fell asleep.
On the next day she woke up and was as hungry as a horse and decided to dig an exit and digged into this direction a trap and then she digged in another direction a trap again.*
And then in this direction there was no trap this time. But she noticed then, that she swallowed dirt the whole time and wasn't hungry anymore.
Now she liked the earth so wonderfull, that sie digged it in again. Then she built a bed, she wasn't seen on the tennis court anymore and became henceforth an earthworm.
Now the fairytale is over.
(written on 1st October 1991)
*
I have no idea - it doesn't make sense in german, too, so I decided to litteraly translate it and not to make sense out of it ;D
(Now for the MLP-Fanfiction )
Rainbow-Pony-Story
****************
Once upon a time there was a little girl, that had blonde hair and blue-black eyes. It was dressed in a red dress with golden flowers and plants on it. The borders and the buttons were made of silver. On the sleeves the dress was silver, too. The dress and the girl were beautiful.
The girl got lost in the deep woods while picking berries. There she suddenly heared many trampling, neighing and snorting. Suddenly a fast Pony came towards her. There Anabel* saw something totally weired. The pony had pink hair and was totally colorful. Suddenly it reined in front of her. As Anabel wanted to pet it, it started to talk - but real horses don't talk! - and what did it said?
"I am Sundance** - and who are you, little girl?"
"I am Anabel and I'm lost."
Anabel ran away quickly, because she was afraid of the Pony. But the Pony outran her soon with her quick feets. Anabel had a scare and the Pony talked.
"You don't have to be afraid of me - I am a Pony from the Ponyland and we are gentle! Come with me to our village first."
As they arrived, Anabel marveled.
There were much more Ponys and there was a Pony standing, that was the queen - she was called Magic Pony*** and had a golden star below her ear.
Then came even more Ponys. They walked towards Anabel and surrounded her.
The queen walked to Sundance.
"Why did you brought that girl with you, Sundance?"
"She got lost - I saw her as I strolled in the woods."
So the colorful Ponys all helped Anabel.
As Anabell was home again, she told the story to her parents.
(written on 9th March 1992)
*
Anabel was the german name of Marple.
www.buffys-paradise.de/Ponyfot…
**
I don't know why I choosed Sundance here. It was either the fact that I liked her in the 2 VHS tapes I had from the very first MLP Cartoon, or the fact that she was called "Sauseschnell" in germany, which means "wingding fast" translated - or simply "pretty fast".
www.buffys-paradise.de/Ponyfot…
***
I have no idea which Pony it was. It simply went under "Zauberpony" (Magic Pony) in the writing. Relating to the mentioned star, it could've been "Magic Star" www.buffys-paradise.de/Ponyfot… - or any other pony of a "Magic Pony" series, so proberly a mere Unicorn ;D
I'm on YouTube! - and other reasons why I was gone
Hi :o
okok, I'm sorry, honestly!
I know I haven't been active here for... goddesses know how long... but there are good reasons for it!
So please hear me out, before you kill me, alright? :o
Reason Nr. 1: The shitty Internet in our village.
I'm not kidding. Our Internet is kinda... shit.
Now, over the last year, my boyfriend found a new way to spend his time on the PC in the evenings: Watching Streams on Twitch. And while that isn't something bad... our Internet makes it bad.
So basically, we are not able to both do freely on the Internet what we want to do at the same time - because we just don't have enough Download Speed.
It's hard
Hell Bent
Spoiler Warning:Very small Some Spoilers for the Doctor Who Finale (maybe a bit definitely bigger if you're good in reading between the lines, so please read further at your own risk!)
.....remember 2 weeks ago?
...you know, when I said that I'm fine with the episode's ending and that I hope Moffat doesn't f*ck it up in the end... and if so, we'd speak again next week?
Yeah, you didn't heard anything from me last weak. Mostly due to the cause that last weeks episode was great :)
I mean, the ending foreshadowed desaster, but I was willing to put it aside for the greatness that was the rest of the episode...
....but now, after the final ep
Doctor Who - Face the Raven
Note: Spoiler free
I'm.... strangely ok with the end of the episode... o.O
I really am. No bad feelings, no grudge. I found it was handled very well.
I'm actually scared of the last two episodes of the season. I really enjoyed every episode which wasn't written by Stephen Moffat, now I fear that those last two.... might ruin what was built up somehow :/
Would be a real shame to see it come to waist.
.....buuuuuuut.... I guess if he DOES ruin it, you'll hear from me again next week.... XD
Doctor Who (Season 9 Episode 5 - small Spoilers!)
4 weeks ago, I was sooo close to giving up on Doctor Who (at least as long as Moffat's still in charge...).
3 weeks ago, I was grumpy, but some small wounds were taped together again.
2 weeks ago, I enjoyed Doctor Who again, and was reminded, that the issue isn't the show, but Moffat's writing.
Last week, I looked forward to the next episode.
Today, my Doctor returned.
Remember 4 weeks ago, when I said that I had to rewatch the first two episodes of Season 4 to "clean myself" from the Season 9 starter?
Remember what I said about Pompeii? About that Marble seller who's more Doctor then the Doctor was?
I started to cry tears of joy when
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Ah, children stories They're adorable. I remember my first story - it was in 1st or 2nd grade, and it was about a letter-wizard who dropped his sack of letters and began building a climbing frame with them. I miss having that much imagination....